1) the background which includes red and blue makes it stands out and the garnett title makes it more effective in which people get attracted to it. My magazine is very colorful.
2) the most important thing i want people to see is the picture of kobe bryant because i want people yo know that this magazine is important and good. The second thing i want people to notice is that the garnett title and then the picture of lebron james and other small titles.
Miss Shen Said:
on February 6, 2008 at 6:11 am
Technical “must haves” 50 / 50
Original pictures posted 0 / 3
Questions answered 6 / 6
Visual hierarchy attempt 4 / 4
Attempt to use text & fonts for layout assist 2 / 2
Selection removed from background 1 / 1
Visual hierarchy question correct 3 / 3
Visual hierarchy clear 2 / 3
Stands out amongst others 1 / 2
Text & Font effectiveness 2 / 4
Custom selection removed from background 2 / 2
Quality of edges smooth 1 / 3
Attempts to colour correct 0 / 2
Image proportions realistic 1 / 2
Visual hierarchy matches intentions 1 / 2
Creativity & Effort above “canned” features - / 3
Professional grade - / 3
Typography is professional - / 2
Professional quality edited elements - / 3
Final 76 / 100
Your right the red and blue really does help it stand out. Good stuff.
See me if you’d like to talk about ways to further improve the quality of your work.
Miss Shen